tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post1933368455288375717..comments2023-03-23T06:57:25.595-04:00Comments on LEAD HEADED: This Dame is...Jack Sniderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05996695793636390845noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post-36850276405283143612007-03-14T17:44:00.000-04:002007-03-14T17:44:00.000-04:00Thanks Mike. I still think it could be better but ...Thanks Mike. I still think it could be better but for now I'll just let it stand.Jack Sniderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05996695793636390845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post-33868116258115853622007-03-14T16:04:00.000-04:002007-03-14T16:04:00.000-04:00The second version is much better. I love the al...The second version is much better. I love the almost animated quality of the 3 figure elements on the right side.Michael Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07830734455794916213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post-33875898312505739812007-03-12T03:58:00.000-04:002007-03-12T03:58:00.000-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Jack Sniderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05996695793636390845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post-62036586770745145082007-03-10T22:15:00.000-05:002007-03-10T22:15:00.000-05:00Excellent revision, Mr Snider.The piece seems more...Excellent revision, Mr Snider.<BR/>The piece seems more cohesive now.Anthony Carpenterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15479136589909350852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post-17519593302063214332007-03-10T14:33:00.000-05:002007-03-10T14:33:00.000-05:00Yeah, I was running through my mental rolodex of n...Yeah, I was running through my mental rolodex of noir cliches and tried to wing a more straight graphic approach. Thanks for the blinds suggestion. I'll add it to what I have in mind and see what comes of it.<BR/><BR/>I'm glad you like the face and smoke though.Jack Sniderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05996695793636390845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37903394.post-5354429873856153322007-03-10T13:39:00.000-05:002007-03-10T13:39:00.000-05:00Jack, I agree that the background does look a litt...Jack, <BR/><BR/>I agree that the background does look a little plaid. If you're going for a noir look, might I suggest the cast shadow of blinds behind the woman? That was a staple visual element in noir films of the period.<BR/><BR/>Great characterization in the face. The plume of smoke is perfect.<BR/><BR/>I look forward to the re-do.Anthony Carpenterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15479136589909350852noreply@blogger.com